UPDATE: had enough now, ive gone too far to change the bits that really need work! it still looks incomplete but this was never a piece with true idea or thought. i just played and practiced and ended up with this, so im gonna leave it this way now and get onto the next piece.
not convinced this is finished yet, looks ok on screen but need to do some touch ups. Would really appreciate some constructive comments on this one, would like to know what to improve add change etc as im still working on it but at a bit of a dead end.
Some kinda zombie punk gimpy anise photomanip cartoon kinda thingy. No meaning or motive i just took a photo and started to play and this happened, the only inspiration at the time i started was from a song....let me expliane.
A few of you would hae heard of the band 'Disturbed' and a track they did 'Down With The sickness'. Now allot more of you will remember a recent re-make of an old film, 'Dawn of the Dead'. Now this song is there main sound track but thats not what triggered it. Within the film when they are all having a jolly old time in the mall the song is sang by a ' Richard Cheese' in the most splendid manor....well thats what inspired me to do a zombie piece. hahaha. enough for now
textures by yet again cheers dude!
and some by me
main photography by me
model was
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great pic, awsome use of textures.
but like you say it just dunt see finished, and im sorry to say i carnt really tell what it is, purhaps the character needs pulling our a bit from the background.
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To be quite honest, I don't see anything that needs improvement. Of course, I speak from a level of photomanipulation that might be very different from yours, especially considering the content of our galleries.
The execution and craftsmanship are both very high. I especially like the rough, leathery texture of his face and the tiny tiny pupils. hehe. Even the figures in the back are simple enough to get the point across and don't overpower or draw attention away from the foreground.
I'm sorry that I was not able to give much advice for improvement, but I don't think you need any. You're a badass.
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This is a really nice piece, the range of textures and colours work really well and are distributed throughout the image so that everything 'sits' on much the same level and your eye is drawn around the image.
I'd agree that the mouth needs altering to make it fit with the rest of the piece, and the exclamation mark needs a little work as the white background stands out because it's too bright. Other than that, you've done an excellent job. Bravo!
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Other than that, I really like it...the detail in it is amazing x
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great pic, awsome use of textures.
but like you say it just dunt see finished, and im sorry to say i carnt really tell what it is, purhaps the character needs pulling our a bit from the background.
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"Victory needs no explanation; defeat allows none"
The execution and craftsmanship are both very high. I especially like the rough, leathery texture of his face and the tiny tiny pupils. hehe. Even the figures in the back are simple enough to get the point across and don't overpower or draw attention away from the foreground.
I'm sorry that I was not able to give much advice for improvement, but I don't think you need any. You're a badass.
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follow the white rabbit...
and please, call me Miranda, not "bitch"...
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I'd agree that the mouth needs altering to make it fit with the rest of the piece, and the exclamation mark needs a little work as the white background stands out because it's too bright. Other than that, you've done an excellent job. Bravo!
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